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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: कोख और कब्र

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    This is not just a poem, this is literally an entire universe, where poems are alive. How beautifully the interconnection of poem has fulfilled the underlying purpose of strong feelings ...

    Jul 21
  • Lyrics » General, Realistic Re: “What We Never Said'' (part 3)

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    This is the kind of poem that becomes more powerful the further you read. What I liked most is that it doesn't try too hard to make the reader emotional. ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: 𝘽𝙤𝙧𝙧𝙤𝙬𝙚𝙙 𝙇𝙞𝙛𝙚

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    This poem offers a thoughtful reflection on identity, regret, and the pressure to become someone we think we should be. At its heart, it is about looking back on life ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » General, General Re: hawthorn

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    This poem is a thoughtful and emotional look at a kind of love that gives more than it receives. Through its garden imagery, it tells the story of someone who ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Where were you

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    Reading this poem felt like listening to someone finally say out loud what many people have felt at some point in their lives. It speaks about a kind of hurt ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: Touch

    i want his slender hands on my waist, ‎tracing the silhouette of the unwanted self ‎gentle and with adoration. ‎His eyes slightly scared to meet mine, ‎as he does so ...

    Jul 19
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: शिकायत ( Complaint)

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    Jul 19
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: I don't love you anymore

    I liked that it's written in simple sentences and no extra efforts have been put to make it extra poetic. The essence is intact, but rhyming could be better. It ...

    Jul 19


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