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Hey WaitingForLife~ WHOA. This was weird. I loved it. The briefness of your work and it's supernatural nature were, for lack of a better word, inspiring. Wow, I'm at a ...

Great! :D I hope my advice was somewhat useful.

You're so welcome! And I actually did understand the meaning of what you were trying to say; it just didn't flow as nicely the way that it was kinda thrown ...

I'm glad you took my suggestions into account! Appreciation appreciated

Aw, you're sweet. Thank you haha.

Haha, you're not an idiot. :) I wrote it in a confusing kind of way. But it was basically an asthma attack mixed with an allergic reaction, if that helps. ...

Thanks so much for taking the time to review this! I'll definitely alter the poem according to your suggestions; I guess I wasn't wary enough of my wording in those ...

Hi! Thank you for the review and the compliments! c,:

Thanks so much for the review! c:

Aw, you're so sweet! Thank you! :D

By "composition" I mean how you structure your verses. And you're so welcome for the review! :D

Wow, I never considered that about the hypnosis! That's pretty neat. And you're very welcome for the review%u2014this amazing poem deserves it. :)

Thanks for the suggestions! I love how you interpreted the figurative meaning I was going for! (btw I love your username ;))

Hi Audy! :D You're so nice haha! I did mean for it to be the fingernails that were overgrown (I'll have to change the wording on that at some point). ...

Thanks for the helpful review! :P