passenger

Hello, fellow District Two member! I'm here to review your work! And @Blackwood, it's the Big Bad Wolf!!!!!!! Well, first of all, I would not have expected the Big Bad ...

Hey again Col! Okay, so this was pretty fricken amazing. I didn't find any grammar mistakes or any nitpicks at all. So, what I interpreted this poem to be: At ...

Hey magpie. Aaaahhhhhh!!!! (The fangirl yells) *me lets out war cry and climbs up onto the stage and tries to drag magpie off and demands writing secrets* Well, anyway. I ...

Hey BlockedWriter21! Welcome to YWS. ^^ Is this your first poem? If it is, then it's super good for your first. Okay, onto the review :-) Since this was a ...

Hey Percybeth! ^_^ I adored this. While it was short, it contained so much description, so much that AH I'M BURNING TO DEATH! Haha. A few suggestions, though. There was ...

Hey Strange. My favorite stanza was the last one; and I guess since the whole point of the poem is that metaphor, then it probably should be my favorite. Anyway. ...

Hey Corax. Oh my gosh I'm crying!!! My tears are fricken multiplying all over the place. That's not fair. Haha, seriously though! This should never happen on the face of ...

Hey thebrightestfell. Woah. This was really profound. I love how you arranged your poem (how you used more of a prose format). I do this with my poems a lot ...

Hey. Dogs rule. I agree. Ha. This is very thoughtful, curious, and insightful. I think about this all of the time. No joke. I enjoyed reading your poem. It's very ...

Hey Maverick. Wow, I didn't expect that. Neat. Besides the superior formatting of the poem (since I see you already have several comments on that), onto the review. I think ...

Hey Hadj. This was an interesting poem. Honestly, when I clicked on your poem, this was not what I had in mind. But I quite liked it. Anyway, onto the ...

Hey Collin. These were interesting (better haikus than I could ever write; I've attempted them, they're not good). The first one made me laugh XD. But besides that, let's get ...

Hey, verymaryanna! Your intro was great; it encaptured me into the poem immediately. There wasn't too much I have to review, since, one, this poem was relatively short, and two, ...

Hi. First of all, I think a lot of people can relate to this. I don't know why, but it seems like a lot more people are tired these days; ...

Heyy Percybeth!