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Also be sure to check out chapter 10! I've been trying to cycle the chapters through 3 main story lines (which might be causing the problems I'm having with choppyness). ...

Hi vampricone6783, Thanks for all your feedback and comments on my work! I really appreciate it. To find out more about whether the narrator passes her exams and finds true ...

Hi quinnisafrog, Thank you so much for your kind comment and the feedback! I'll try to make it less choppy in the future. Be sure to check out chapter 10 ...

The cliffhanger will be resolved in Chapter 9 (which will hopefully be out by the end of this week, 6/1/2025). Thank you for your patience!

Thank you for your review! I really appreciate it and hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters. Please let me know if you have any recommendations or suggestions as ...

Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words. If you have any feedback or suggestions on how I can improve my writing in future chapters, let me know!

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This is a really interesting poem. While I'm not familiar with your world building or characters, I can still relate to the poem. "He’s just like a child/Innocent and sweet/Until ...

Thanks for the feedback! In later chapters (such as Chapter 5, 6, and 7) I tried to address how the character responds to the ups and downs of life. Let ...

Thanks for the comment and the feedback! I'll try to keep consistent tenses more in the future.

wizartjay, Thank you so much for your feedback! I took you advice and tried to make the character someone you can feel for when writing Chapter 6 (please let me ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you find it relatable and I appreciate the feedback :)

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to maintain a more clear structure in future chapters.

The simplicity and rhythmic scheme of this poem has a tranquil beauty to it, uncomplicated and direct. It brings to mind the imagery of a tranquil pond, the wind touches ...