origamidragons

This is beautiful. The emotion is conveyed very well- the pain is obvious and sharp. This is a very good, emotional description of the disappointment and anger that comes with ...

Hello! Origamidragons here with a review. I'll be honest. I have no idea what's happening here. The descriptions are great, but since it goes all over the place they're hard ...

This is honest and beautiful. You make your points well and strongly. I'm very sorry that your friend isn't who you thought they were. That betrayal cuts deep. I'm very ...

The shortness and simplicity of this poem are very good and work in its favor. It makes the ending sudden, but also clean. It's raw and vulnerable, which works very ...

Oooh creepy. Makes me question the reality of the situation. Is the girl a ghost? Is Victoria a ghost? This has happened before? Stories that prompt such questions are good ...

Ahh. Beautiful. The key for more descriptive poetry, for me, is that it appeals to multiple senses, and you pull that off wonderfully. Autumn is my favorite season so I ...

Hey! So, I like your theme here. Creativity is a GREAT subject for a poem because of its abstract nature. Your ideas are well developed and everything, but this poem ...

This is so incredibly true. I love it. I'm just gonna say that I don't comfort eat while I write. I don't know anyone who does. So I think the ...

Hello, I'm Ori, and this is a review! *pokes review* So, I'll admit I havent read the rest of your story, so there was a lot here that didn't make ...

Nice. I like the fun tone this letter has- it's not serious at all, but in a good way. It's actually very adorable and relatable because we've all been there, ...