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Re: "Life's Score"
Hello Elliot! good poem. I think that it didn't really flow with what you were saying. maybe I think it's...never mind I don't know how to put it! :( Well ...
Sat May 19, 2007 2:26 pm -
Re: Against my will
Hey linds! :) I loved your poem! good description. I agree with the people who have critiqued before mine...the full stops make it seem kind of like blah blah (stop) ...
Sat May 19, 2007 2:22 pm -
Re: Wet Dogs
I liked this little poem! Good Job! I love that it was talking about pigs! Great Job and keep it up! :D :elephant:
Sat May 19, 2007 2:19 pm -
Re: Bangin'
Hey! good poem I think it ended a little quickly! :) Maybe make it a little longer then it will be good! :D Great job!
Sat May 19, 2007 3:17 am -
Re: Black and White Movies
Hey :) I love your poems! They're always good! Great job and keep it up! btw a little repetitive on the black and white thing but except for that I ...
Sat May 19, 2007 3:16 am -
Re: "Mice"
how cute! :) I can understand that you wrote it awhile ago! It was short, very short! anyway I liked it a lot! :elephant:
Sat May 19, 2007 2:14 am -
Re: This Instant
Good poem! :) Did you write this or did you take it from somewhere? Because at the bottom it say taken from a book title (I forgot the name!) Well ...
Sat May 19, 2007 2:11 am -
Re: Not You...Me
First off good poem! :) I think maybe having the three periods at the end of things might be a little weird! I personally think the stew thing isn't fitting ...
Sat May 19, 2007 2:06 am -
Re: Magic 8 Ball
I liked this poem! I love those little magic eight ball thingys! anyway good poem! :) Great job! :elephant:
Fri May 18, 2007 2:55 am -
Re: "Magic of Hollywood"
Hey I liked this poem! I think you need punctuation! that's an important thing! I liked the idea that you mixed and matched things from Hollywood films! good job :elephant:
Fri May 18, 2007 2:47 am -
Re: Civility
good description! :) I love this piece! Great job! :D :elephant:
Wed May 16, 2007 3:24 am -
Re: Envy
wow! :shock: I love your poems! they're great everytime! :) Wonderful job and good description! Well done :elephant:
Wed May 16, 2007 3:23 am -
Re: Little Birdie
I really liked this poem! :) It was very cute! It was kinda trying to describe history I liked it a lot :D Good Job! Keep it up! :elephant:
Tue May 15, 2007 3:47 am -
Re: Fascist
This was pretty good! :) I liked it. :D It didn't really catch my eye though. Maybe when trying to do work like this put in an event unless your ...
Tue May 15, 2007 3:44 am -
Re: Sweet Bonnie
This is a really good poem! :) I liked it a lot! I got your point really well. Great job on not overdoing punctuation and words. :D :elephant:
Tue May 15, 2007 3:40 am