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Re: Star Fallen
Blast! Beaten to it again by Rosey! *shakes fist angrily* Anyway, this was a pretty cool story. The news report sounded very realistic! :P Since a lot of little convention ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
Loved it! I love just about anything that makes fun of Twilight in favor of J.K. Rowling (aka a female Albert Einstein with better hair) OH NO you didn't just ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: loss
This isn't poetry. Why did you post it here? Honestly, I don't know why I even bothered to read it. This should be marked for deletion, or at least moved. ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: The Price Too High.
Hello. There's not much to say about this poem. War is a topic touched on frequently in literature of virtually any kind, and justly so, considering the enormous impact it ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Death Sestina
I don't understand the lack of periods. I noticed there was one at the end, but I'm left wondering if there was a particular reason or not. This isn't long, ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Earthmovers
I like the perspective and the way things are described, cool and creepy at the same time, but other than that I think I will agree with Incandescence that there's ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Concrete Apocalypse
Darn! Beaten to it by Rosey Unicorn again! Is there anywhere you don't write reviews? :x Anyway, I'm giving this a big fat gold star. I was expecting no punctuation ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Across the Sky
I could recommend several changes to punctuation and such, but that's already been done and isn't usually crucial anyway. (In my opinion, at least) At first I wasn't particularly struck ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: One Last Chance
To answer the question asked in the title, yes, you should continue this idea. Flesh out the story as much as you can in your head or on paper or ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Into the Woods
This was a fairly well-written short story, and while I think Moriah might have been a bit extensive in her revisions, she made plenty of good points. Nothing left for ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
*sigh* It's so lonely being a Dune fan...I have yet to find another on this site. Anyway, Dune (by Frank Herbert) is definitely my favorite. But the first four of ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: A Web of Words
Hello! First, I would like to commend you on your hilarious avatar! :lol: Second, I congratulate you on your very good poem. :) Oh darn, I have the hiccups. *hiccup* ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Wheel of Time
I read all twelve of the WoT books. Thinking about them gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling all over! :D Okay maybe that's an exaggeration but they were still ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
Okay guys, some people (like me...) haven't finished the series, so please put SPOILER! at the top of any posts with information that readers might not want to know yet. ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Puppy Love
The meeting between Adair and Kyra seemed kind of casual, perhaps rushed. "Hey we're both werewolves. Wanna hang out?" "Yeah sure let's go." :lol: This reminds me of Narnia. It ...
Nov 11, 2008
