oirichu

So so heart tearing, even at the beginning I felt this sense of dread. Maybe its due to knowing what life is as a lgbtq+ identifying person, that knowingness of ...

(resent because I forgot to click the yes button :') so sorry) I don't know if you mean it intentionally, but to me I've always used hurricanes in examples of ...

Reading it felt like stepping into someone’s mind mid-spiral, but in this strangely beautiful way where the imagery carries you along even while the emotions pull down. The trains metaphor ...

This one really knocked the wind out of me. The way you’ve written it feels like a quiet heartbreak wrapped in rhyme—the softness of the rhythm contrasts with the weight ...

Ohhh this one gave me such cozy feelings! Right from the start, the rhythm feels like you’re flipping through a photo album in verse—each stanza is a snapshot of a ...

This was such a intertwining read, especially with a collaboration of three-writers, this felt very impactful!! So I wanted to give a review from each perspective. Review from Genevieve (warm ...

Ahh this piece just radiates gentleness, it feels like opening up a family photo album and watching love flicker between the pages. You really caught the way love doesn’t just ...

Hello hello ^^ !!thank you so much for sharing this piece, it carries such a tender weight. It feels like you’ve taken all the quiet aches of growing up too ...

I just wanted to say first of all, this poem really made me smile but also ache in a quiet way. It’s such a sweet idea to give Salt and ...

Hello ^^ I want to give a short review on this because it really swept me away. Thank you for sharing such an intimate and overwhelming piece!! Reading it felt ...

Thank you for sharing your work in progress!! This was a very evocative piece and I can't wait to see your future work! Your poem feels like opening a letter ...

This was so beautiful to read, just like a cosmic tragedy!! I wanted to leave a review

Thank you for sharing your first poem!! it already carries such heart and honesty. It's always wonderful to see people get into different writing mediums to express themselves! What I ...

Thank you for sharing this piece, it felt quiet and tender, like a whispered confession at night. What stays with me is how the smallest gesture, the twitch of an ...

Hello ^^ I want to give a short review on this as it really connected with me. Thank you for sharing such a intimate piece!! Reading your poem felt like ...