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I'm going with how my mentor and I chose to write this most things are grammar that will be changed but all of my Beta's seemed to like the rest ...

Thank you so much for the review and advice I will take it into consideration when editing which I am currently doing the self-edit.

Thanks for the help and the Review

Thanks for the review

Hello, I'm sandman and I'll be your review on this lovely evening! So let's just dive right into the good things, shall we? So, first, I love how the title ...

Hello, I'm sandman and I'll be your review on this lovely evening! So let's just dive right into the good things, shall we? So, first, I love how the title ...

Hello, It's Sandman here and, I'll be reviewing your poem today. This poem reminds when I first moved to the States. I had a lot of issues then and they ...

This was a writing prompt so it wasn't my idea. This is one of my actual suicide notes from some of the first few months after moving to America from ...

Yeah but, it is one of my actual suicide notes from a few months after moving to America from Iceland. Anthony and I are... well.... together now. Takk fyrir. Thanks ...

You're welcome. It was my pleasure

Thank you so much for the review and everything that you helped me find that is wrong with this chapter like the thing about the schools it should've been skulls.

Actually, She isn't a ghost. She's a vampire. And, Thank you for the Review. As a Goth, I try to create something 'spooky' all the time.

Thank you. You're one of the only people to think that I'm a sweet person but that's because I'm too antisocial to go up and talk to people. Thank you ...

Hello, I'm Sandman. First off, don't be sorry that this is depressing. There is a lot of things that are considered depressing so don't be sorry for that. It is ...

Thank you. I hope he gets better too.