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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Pain

    Hi, It's Sandman here. So I relate to this poem because I understand psychological pain and frustration with revenge as a possibility that you're considering. In this poem, you describe ...

    Mar 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Reason to Believe (Part 1)

    Hello, I'm Sandman. So This is similar to something that I went through, the depression, the struggle with religion, but I also struggled with sexuality. This describes to a T ...

    Jun 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Idyllic

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I'm reviewing your lovely poem. This is a great poem overall, but there are a few mistakes in this that could be fixed or left, as ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Loss of Pulse

    Hello, It's Sandman to review your work. I hope you're having a good day. So, let's just get right in shall we. First off I would like to say that ...

    Jan 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Last.

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I'll be reviewing your work today. So, let's start with what I liked. I loved how the title goes with the poem. It's a great piece ...

    Jan 11, 2017
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Dear mum........

    Hello, I'm ofmonstersandmen1234 or Sandman. Hope you're having a good evening. Overall this is a really dramatic piece of work. I really liked the way you made me think at ...

    Jan 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Transcendence

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I am here to help you out with this magnificent work. I love everything that you've done with this and, it is a truly wonderful thing. ...

    Oct 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Prisoner of Consciousness

    Hello, I'm sandman and I'll be your review on this lovely evening! So let's just dive right into the good things, shall we? So, first, I love how the title ...

    Oct 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cutting makes me hol(e)y

    Hello, It's Sandman here and, I'll be reviewing your poem today. This poem reminds when I first moved to the States. I had a lot of issues then and they ...

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flowers lead to sadness

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I'll be taking care of all of your reviewing needs today. To start us off I want to say that this is something that we share. ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Broken Home

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I will be taking care of your reviewing needs today. So I really liked this poem. It grabbed my attention and wouldn't let me go. I ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: This Land Is(n't) Your Land

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I'll be your Reviewer on this lovely Review Day. To start off I think this is a good poem. I can tell that you're trying to ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to the rebel of ages past and future

    Hello, This is Sandman and I'll be your Reviewer today. I like the feeling of this poem and I can tell that you love something about this girl other than ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3

    Hello, I'm Sandman and I'll be your Reviewer today. This is an amazing story. I like the plot and the characters. After reading the first paragraph of this chapter I ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Ghost Horse

    Hello, I'm Sandman and, I'll be you're Reviewer on this lovely evening. I loved this work. You put the image of the horse galloping through the woods and, made feel ...

    Aug 28, 2016


trust your heart if the seas catch fire (and live by love though the stars walk backward)
— E.E. Cummings