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Hey there. Just a few things that bothered me- the emotions were too powerfull. Either she's a drama quine [I don't really know how to spell that] or you want ...

Hitler? Wow, heavy subject. You sure you're ready to take that on? The horrors that happened there are far more horrifying than you could imagine. I don't think you want ...

I don't understand much about poetry so this is my opinion as a reader. It was good. I kept getting chills as I read. You were right to post that ...

I liked it a lot, it was very interesting, and you opened it up nicely. At first I thought it was a one side relationship- he seemed to be groveling ...

WHOA. I just read the rest of the chapters, it took me like two hours! But, my god, it was worth it. WOW is not an understatement. This is... something ...

Hey there! Welcome abored [is that how you spell it?]!! Just so you know, your writting was great. Using a past tense would be better in my opinion, though, but ...

It's so sad... it really is moivng, scary that something like this can exist, that things like this do exist. I thought it was really really good. Short, but great. ...

AWESOME! I'm a little overeacting but it's just because I think it's great!! You had a few minor spelling mistakes, but other than that, *mouth open* it's just amazing. Publish ...

I love it!! It's awesome!! You did an amazing job on this!! *all hystericall over finidng one of those awesome stories you just never want to stop reading* Oh, and ...

Hey Averian!! [hope I spelled that correctly], i I just wanted to say this story is awesome!! Loved what you did with it now, though it was good in the ...

I liked the begining actually, only I didn't like the part about that you say to much "the man did this, the man did that" too mechanicall in my opinion. ...

This is awesome!! You will most likely get it published, and whoever won't let you is really missing out. It was close to perfection, in my opinion. THIS IS GREAT! ...

I really liked it! It was sort of creepy- blood and all, but you were creative and used a lot of adjectives and I thought it was beautifull, even though ...

hey! I already told you I love this story! It's wonderful! A few spelling mistakes here and there, but that really doesn't matter. It's a brilliant idea, come up with ...

This is really nice! It's good, and you tell hints about the future that make me curious. I liked it! Oh, and you stick with the langueg you chose, that's ...