octoberskye

Hey @Toto25! I'm here for a review. (Because you haven't posted in a while, I will try to be kind ;) ) I really liked the overarching theme here, anxiety. ...

Octoberskye here for a review! First off, can I just say wow...that seriously gave me chills. I love how you kept up with the theme of the character getting older ...

Heya! octoberskye here for a small review. I love how you take possibly a huge pet peeve for most people: "no offense" and used the poem to turn the tables ...

Hey, octoberskye here! First off, I think this is actually really funny. This is definitely my kind of humor. My favorite part was how you put a bit of romance, ...

Just to start off, this is a great poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It's always really fun to read a poem that has a persona in it. A character, ...

Wow, just to start off, this is a really great poem, it seriously gave me chills. I love the repetition used for "don't cry" and "don't fall" used here. The ...

Haha, I agree with Firebird99, you've got some imagination! Grammar and spelling was good. There was some confusion when I came to "A brown unicorn volunteered. “Okay, Yol, just tell ...