nycto

Hey Fuzz, I'm Nycto. This was an interesting read. I like how you presented this, it wasn't something dead-ended, and anyone could interpret it-- if you were aiming at that, ...

Haha! I can relate to this very well. I'm not the type of person that can focus on a particular subject, something that I obviously need to fix. I enjoyed ...

Hey, there nycto here. I love how this poem is simple yet conveys the emotions perfectly. I like how you could make simple everyday situations into poetry. I like this ...

Seems like this time I'm going to review. 1. The italics, like the people who reviewed below you, this really helped me when reading your poetry. I have a habit ...

[insert polite greeting] This has potential to be a good poem, with the emotions currently flowing I guess you could actually make it good. Let me tell you what doesn't ...

I like this kind of poetry. It has few words but can convey something much bigger than that. Just like what RavenHawk said, this poem doesn't have to be about ...

Spot on, my favorite kind of literature(the minimalist style). I love how you went with this minimalist style. The flow, in my opinion, was great. It really gave emphasize on ...

I like the choice of words; how you used bones to describe the feet and how you didn't tell the readers the exact meaning of everything. It really made me ...

This poem has potential. It's just the positioning of the comas makes it a bit harder to get the flow out. And the disturbing part is sometimes it rhymes and ...

I liked the content of the poem. The message you were trying was god but I think how you conveyed it wasn't really quite well. The use of vocabulary isn't ...

the question on the third stanza disturbed me when I read it. if it were me i would use parenthesis, but i think that wouldn't change it when someone'll read ...