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Dylan McFaythe

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Apple Tree

    Thank you so much for your feedback!!

    Mar 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Apple Tree

    Thank you so much for your review! Your praise/criticism is super helpful:)

    Mar 9, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: "I wouldn't want you"

    Haha, I'm sorry about the symbols; I was just trying to find a way to separate the poem into stanzas lol. I will definitely look more at the rhyme, too. ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: "I wouldn't want you"

    Thank you for your feedback! I agree with you, if I%u2019m honest, this work is fairly juvenile. I wrote it quickly in the heat of emotion, haha. Seriously though, I ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Teenagers

    I really like your writing, especially this. Just wanted to say that :)

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: Love Wins

    FYI: Interns running across the lawn is a reference to how the interns run across the lawn to deliver a verdict reached by the Supreme Court. Forest to waters is ...

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: Sylvie

    Ohmigosh!!!!!! Totally was Nicholas and Frieda!!!!!! So glad you caught that!!!

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: Sylvie

    Thank you:) Glad to hear you liked it!!

    Oct 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: Sylvie

    Thank you for your review! I challenge you to learn more about Sylvia Plath and then re-read the poem with that in mind; that may clear up some things. I ...

    Oct 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Clock

    You made me laugh out loud in English class...

    Oct 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Politics Re: Unborn Christina

    Thank you so much-I didn't catch that typo either!

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Politics Re: Unborn Christina

    Thank you so, so, so, so much!! I cannot express how happy your words have made me. Nobody has ever paid me such a compliment-thanks sooooooo much! :)

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Politics Re: Unborn Christina

    Thank you so much!

    May 17, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Rain on Glass

    You're welcome and thank you at the same time hahaha!

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Politics Re: Unborn Christina

    I think that this is my feelings about abortion expressed in the point of view of an aborted child. Thank you so much for your feedback!

    May 17, 2014


Who, being loved, is poor?
— Oscar Wilde