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Re: Cicada
strangely troubled, young as fire, sacrificed unto desire; I really like this line! It creates such vivid imagery into my mind and create an amazing mix of fire and darkness ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: A Beautiful Ballerina
Very pleasent poem! :) I do love haiku, and I've never seen anyone use it for a ballerina, so well done! This is a great poem, and created a great ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: This Lie
Hmm, this poem does make me wonder what the poem is exactly about. The way it's set out does not blend well while reading it, as the amount of syllables ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: A Bed of Roses
This is just brilliant. :) Its a little sad, but it really rings home with my personal situations as well! The last two lines: "For, how can anything last when ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Iambic pentametre - attempt D:
Bwhahahaha, I did this lesson :) Obviosuly i didn't do the task as I do not remeber this! :lol: Anyway, 'mazing job Rhi! :D ALSO, SACRALIDGE YOU SPATULA!!!! :xd: You ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: This is no longer a poem
Regarding navita's review, mine is going to be rather pitiful :lol: Anyway, I really like this poem, it rathers twists your eyes a little, which makes you laugh at the ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Some people live for pain.
:) Nice poem Silent! Yet, the whole maths thing is fun and all, but it deploys a certain sense of 'childishness' with primary school english lessons. Of course you do ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter One (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
:) Hiya Golden. You know me, I'm not one for long reviews, so ill make it short and snappy. Like a midget crocodile... XD This is absoloutly amazing and I ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
Melvin Burgess - Bloodtide - Just a brilliant fantasy adaptation of Romeo + Juliet! I strongly advise anyone to read this book, as it is full of action and fantasy ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
The stealthy-nom-nom-stealer (thanks, nova. :3) LOOOOOOOOOVVVEESS THIS!!!!!!!! :) Yes, it does rock! :P :D amazing song, It'd suited really well along with the song, I listened to the song as ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Sneak Peek: "Hate"
If they ask, I shall give :P Amazing, NCM! I love your work~ This is an amazing piece, and even though im'ma boy... (ya wouldnt guess :xd:) I can totally ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: The Battlefield
This isn't gonna be a review, just a quick note :P I really like it. :lol: It's great! Though, I think that maybe you should put it into the lyrics ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Roberto Who Was Greedy
Haha! :) This is really good, should be a childrens poem... (apart from the part where he bleed's to death O_O :lol: :) I really like it, but once or ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: NE; Prologue. New book.
:) Amazing, I hope to see an edited version of this! The story is really gripping, as I do love a good olden times fantasy!~ By the way LoVeLeSs, emerald ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: The truth will out~ chapter one (Twilight fan fic)
Ha :) I am what you would call a 'Twinerd' and i always relish the chance to see a bit of fan-fic :!: (to be honest, I dont think stephenie ...
Apr 13, 2010
