nomadpenguin

Thank you everyone for all the reviews! In regard to line breaks, I was conducting a little experiment here that obviously did not work out. If you read my other ...

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I copy and pasted from Google Docs, so I'm not quite sure what code tag, but the font is Georgia.

In attacking the stereotyping of teenagers, you stereo type adults. Not a criticism, just an observation. Also, I think part of the reason adults think teenagers all smoke and do ...

It sounds like you're writing about the Doctor...

Wow...what a breathtaking poem.

Most of the poem's flow was pretty good. It has a slightly musical quality to it. On thing I would change is how you put "was" on a line by ...