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Hi, Evi. I like this poem. I'm so glad you paid attention to RHYTHM. The rhythm is perfect. I like the premise pf the poem. I especially like how, when ...

I usually don't like love poems, but I do like this one! I agree that in some of your lines, the rhythm is off. May I suggest rewrites for the ...

I love this. From the first minute I looked at it, I liked it. It was readable , sparse, hardly a word out of place. You clearly have control over ...

I liked reading this! It had really good voice, especially if you say you've never written poetry before. How is that possible? What about haikus in english class? : ) ...

This is lovely and a bit confusing. Is it really about a moth? In the first stanza, I though you were talking about a woman, and just comparing her to ...

Hi! I liked reading this. It had a nice, archetypal feel, like the happiness at the end of Lord of the Rings or something. My problem with it is that ...

I enjoyed reading this. In trying to guess which person got his wish, I feel like Vizzini from The Princess Bride saying "I can clearly not choose the wine in ...

I sure enjoyed this. Very believable Mormon dialogue. : ) It was a bit hard to follow with all the different characters. I HATE writing scripts though, so I don't ...

I'm sorry no one has commented on this. Someone should have! I enjoyed reading this. You have an interesting, old-fashioned style. The winds were strong today, bustling and roaring like ...

Hi, Eliza. I liked this. Based on this alone, I'd say you are a good writer! : ) I read the person's poem and made my little nitpicks about grammatical ...

I loved this. I love the description. I can imagine you quickly taking in and passing judgments about the people in the car. You gave it an easy and effortless ...

This just has a really endearing quality. It's hard to dislike it. I understand your repetition of the one stanza, but within the first two stanzas there is awkward repetition. ...

maybe this is just me, but the first stanza reminded me of like a love story. for the whole poem, i thought it was a girl talking to a guy! ...

Undulant, you haven't been on YWS in 10 days! Come back! I liked your poem!!!! Chapped Eating the dandruff scabs off my head my eyes are watering from nonexistent onions ...

I neverrr read long stuff, and I was interested enough to read all of the way through this, so good job! haha I liked this. You have some comma errors, ...