neptune

Back for another review! The temperature outside matched her current emotions: icy and bitter. The way her emotions are described is a bit awkward? It's a good comparison (of her ...

Hello again! Here for another review! Apologies if I'm not quite speedy with them, hopefully my feedback will still have some quality. Besides, there was a chance, however small, that ...

Hello again! I'll just hop right into the review, seeing as it is a little long! Nitpicks & comments: The room came in and out of focus in short burst ...

Hello! I saw your comment on my review for your first chapter and realized there was a prologue, haha. I guess it would help clear things up a bit. So, ...

Hey there! Some nitpicks & comments: So this tree theory states, basically, that for any possible choice there is a universe consisting of the consequences of that choice. "Basically" doesn't ...

Hello again! Here to review once more! Let's just get into it, shall we? “Our costs amount to 21 silvers. If we charge 35 silvers, we'll make a total profit ...

Hey Tucker! I've been meaning to pick up a piece of yours for a while now, but somehow I haven't yet. So, I'm going to change that! Let's get into ...

Hey, Lives4Christ24! I'll be giving this piece a quick review! Let's get into it. A haiku! I don't actually see many of these around here anymore. Maybe because the way ...

Hey Querencia! I've read and reviewed a couple of your chapters, but not enough to really understand what has happened, so I'll pretty much be reviewing this with no clue ...

Hey, so this has been in the green room for a while now, so I thought I'd see what I could do. I haven't reviewed in a quick second, so ...

Hello ThatGeekyGirl! Since this is the first chapter of your new novel (congratulations!), I thought I'd stop by and give some feedback and pointers for the future. Hopefully my advice ...

Hey SunsetTree~ This poem caught my interest in its simplicity yet deep meaning. I got a good glimpse of your poetic style so I decided to give this review a ...

Hello! I'll be reviewing your poem today! You look at me as if I was the sun Squinting at me in anger, yet always wanting me to come back. I ...

Hey Storm! Finally here for that review you requested. It’s been sooo long and I apologize for not getting to this sooner. Let’s see if any of my review will ...

Hello! I'll be reviewing your poem for today. Let's get right into it. I loved the analogy between plants and people! Although I think it has been done many times ...