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Re: A Different Kind of Goblin 1: Crossing
I really liked that story. It has some things that I can relate to and some I can't at all. I think it would be fine just by itself or ...
Jun 3, 2005 -
Re: the design booth
I thought that was a great story. It could have so many different meanings. I enjoyed it!
Jun 3, 2005 -
Re: the tears that fall- the perfection of a woman in love
A beautiful poem! I really enjoyed reading it.
Jun 3, 2005 -
Re: Muse
Overall it was awesome! I really enjoyed it, but towards the end the poem lost its rhythm and fell apart. Maybe you should keep the same length phrases throughout the ...
Jun 3, 2005 -
Re: Nature's Poem.
Awesome poem! Like everyone else I loved the first two lines
May 10, 2005 -
Re: The Revenge of The Raven
Well...I couldn't think of a metaphor for something sharp so that line was kind of as a last resort. And I think I get what you are saying about the ...
Apr 29, 2005 -
Re: english gothic
wow...that was amazing. I can picture everything in my head. Really great!
Apr 29, 2005 -
Re: Rain Before Dawn, Chapter 2- some language
The overall plot is great. I really love the paragraphs in italics. You need to make the non-italic stuff as descriptive as the italic stuff...if that made any sense But ...
Apr 4, 2005 -
Re: The Gossip Of Gaffel Tavern
I redid the paragraphs...I hope it works
Apr 3, 2005 -
Re: The Revenge of The Raven
Thanx guys. And someone visit Darkmoon158's Blog please! lol
Apr 3, 2005 -
Re: No Apologies
WoW! That is a really good poem. It leaves you thinking. But does every break up end in a note?? Most I've seen have. Again I say very good poem.
Mar 25, 2005 -
Re: The Gossip Of Gaffel Tavern
I put it into paragraphs but, as you can see I'm not very good with paragraphs...I hope it works..for now at least.
Mar 8, 2005 -
Re: The Real World
I actually like this poem. It is very deep.
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
Its a really good story. I've read it alot.
Mar 6, 2005