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Thank you for the kind words. Yeah, I sort of cut it off there, because I wanted to get a feel for how it was going. I'll fix the typos. ...

No you didn't offend me ;-) I tend to ignore rhyming strict rhyming patterns as I think they make the poem sound silly. There wasn't supposed to be a pattern, ...

Hey man, I'm glad someone read it with the right mindset. Thank you!

Thanks!

This was awesome. It started so simply that I thought I would be interested, but you lead my interest in a rising climax all the way to the end. Creeped ...

The best way to understand this is that it was written as if from the view of Jesus. It wasn't meant to be angry or dark, but you are right ...

Thanks for being detailed, but all I really got from it is that you want me to pretty much scratch the poem. You did tell me what was good or ...

Right on man! I enjoyed this, and that's all I have to say.

FINALLY! Somebody does something rather enjoyable! That's all I have to say.

Ready like this is like listening to meshuggah. =)

About the "smeared" thing. I didn't see anything joined. In my head I saw stardust smeared together. It wouldn't have made sense to me. ;-)

I think you're over thinking it a bit. The poem is a description of an image I had in my head. It may not make sense if you take it ...

I don't think it's exactly poetic, but I like it. Scientism is retarded. What ever happened to loving your neighbor as yourself?

Thank you very much! Yeah, I know the capitalizing is "wrong" , but it looks better that way to me. I guess I get my drawing and writing mixed up ...

This poem eerily reminded me of one of my older poems. In a really cool way that is. The use of words like "Thy" felt akward to me, but that ...