nativecatcher

Wow, this is different, I've never seen a novel like this. Are you planning on making it like this for ever on? Or is this just showing the characters that ...

Actually the woman isn't a vampire, but if it's getting kind of confusing I'll try to make it more clear. I will try to post more also :lol:

Loved it but again add more detail.

I really liked reading your first I was hesitant and skipped over, but decided to reconsider. I'm glad I did because I found it original and interesting. I would love ...

I thought it was good as the other readers said and I agree with them. You should try to slow your pace down a bit.Also try to use more description. ...

No it wasn't mean it actually helped a lot. Thanks for taking time, I greatly appreciate it.

Thanks for all your tips, and reviews they helped. :lol:

................Wow that was very good. No words can really describe how moving it was, and at the end it was very surprising. I loved it and you should continue with ...

Thanks for all of your help!

Thank you for all of your reviews and tips I will gladly take them into consideration.

Actually I did mean to say that but if it doesn't make sense I'll change it to another insect or fly or whatever.

Thanks for helping I took your advice and made the changes!I hope it's better now and easier to understand.

Thanks for your critiques and tips this will help me a lot. I will edit my prologue and add more, and again THANK YOU!(P.S Durriedog you weren't nagging :lol: )

Its was very creative and interesting. I could find nothing wrong with it, but that maybe you should describe everything a little but more. Other than that it was very ...

I really like this story and usually i don't really finish the story unless it is good, so your story was really good.I really liked it and it had me ...