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Thank you so much everyone and yes, boys have trouble talking to girls, especially if it's somebody they like. Those that say they don't are purely and simply... LIARS! Again, ...

Thank you so much. I appreciate it ;-)

Wow, thank you for your lovely comment. You said it's hard for you to put your thoughts down on paper. Well, the trick is- don't think. Just write. Don't worry ...

Thank you for your lovely comments! I'm glad you like this poem. Yes, I understand your comment about 'just' Dearie and I agree. I will edit this out. However, the ...

Thank you so much guys! I'm really pleased you like this poem. Hey ES! ;-p The reason why I described the glass as 'half-full' is because I wanted to emphasise ...

Thank you so much for your lovely comment and for your advice. I really appreciate it. ;-)

This is great, but I have just a few little suggestions. Do you remember when the birds they You don’t need ‘they’ in this line. It’s grammatically incorrect. as it ...

Cheers Dallas. I appreciate your comment. To answer your question- no, I am not afraid. My faith is very important to me, more important than what people may say about ...

Hi, sorry for the late reply. Thank you for the advice, I will remember what you've said and I will make changes to my poem. I will not be posting ...

Sorry about the T- just changed it ;D 'I bought the chain with my eyes' doesn't mean exchanging eyes for the chain. It's a metaphor. When you desire material things ...

She'ol is another name for Hades, and both represent the 'cemetery' of mankind, or DEATH to be more precise. The constant war is not between two 'people', it's between a ...

I'm not sure about the missing apostrophes. Here I'm using the number 2. One ARM, Two ARMS. I think that in this case the apostrophe is unnecessary. It wouldn't fit ...

'Severing the silence comes a diamond-splitting crack And the violating silhouette lies writhing on its back.' I really like this piece. Flawless rhythm and a brilliant rhyme scheme. The lines ...