Hi, sorry for the late reply.
Thank you for the advice, I will remember what you've said and I will make changes to my poem. I will not be posting changes on the website as I would also have to do that on all the other websites. Plus, this is a very old poem, one that I wrote when I was just a beginner. Soon I'll be posting more recent poems and hopefully you'll find these more appealing.
Thanks again.
Nathan.
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