I'm not sure about the missing apostrophes. Here I'm using the number 2. One ARM, Two ARMS. I think that in this case the apostrophe is unnecessary. It wouldn't fit as it would sound as if I'm saying "arm is = arm's" or that I'm implying that the baby belongs to his arms, which in that case would make the arms a possessive noun. Unless I'm missing something, I'm pretty sure that the apostrophe doesn't apply here.
However, I agree with everything else in your review. Sometimes I don't really pay attention to detail and use unnecessary repetition. Bear in mind, though, that this poem was written a long time ago, when I was just a poetry newbie. I'll keep your comments in mind and I will apply them to my work at home. I won't be changing them on this website, because if I did I would also have to make changes on all the other websites (and I'm just too lazy for that ;p).
Anyways, thank you for your lovely comment
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