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Re: Modest Impressions
OK, WOW, just WOW. this is the best work i have read in a long time. WOW. nanya here to review : i tend to place a disclaimer : im ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Orphan Sky
hello there, cutie here to review: i tend to place a disclaimer that i"m not a professional, just passing by :) Ok, lets start. First of all i think the ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: "Obsessions"
hi, cutie here to review: i'm in no way a professional. Just thought i should place a disclaimer first :).OK, LETS START first of all, i love the thought behind ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Growing Up
Hi. nanya here. i liked this poem and i can relate to it so much. when you begin to grow up, you expect to be respected and have alot of ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Happy Home
OMG !! was what i screamed after i read; "Her next stop was the Children’s Mental Health Facility of Memphis, a 12-hour drive and one in which she wasn't sure ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Heartbreak
its sad and a lil pathetic how much i can relate to this poem. But somethings made me cringe. OK, i'll show you. "The brick wall that you Put between ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Teardrops On My Guitar
I hate myself sometimes, for loving a guy who doesn't love me back. Feelings don't just go away because you want them to, however. And maybe someday he might care ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: First Date
"she had slumped in her seat, passed out with the silliest smile on her face" Funniest part of the story. made me laugh. So i'm not really good at this ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Struggle for Sanity
hi. i'm nanya. here to review i can relate so much to this poem, it's like it literally describes my life. Your descriptive ability is wonderful. someone that cannot relate ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: The House of Diamonds
HI. here to review. "The house of diamonds becomes a home when the moon wakes up." This was my best part. love the way your imagination flows because the house ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: To Love a Killer
hi. your title caught my attention so i decided to read. starting from the first line, "You're heart is cold," its supposed to be "Your heart is cold". Secondly, you ...
Nov 24, 2013
