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I liked what was happening here. Except for spelling and grammar problems. I tried to like it, but was instantly drawn away from the meaning of the poem by the ...

While I'll admit, it took me a while to get into this one, I did. The repetition of "field" early on in the poem worked. The short, to-the-point lines worked. ...

It's not that I didn't like this piece, because I truly did! It's just that at first, I wasn't quite sure it was a poem. Maybe a dramatic monologue or ...

This imagery is great for the overall mood and topic of the poem. I think you really created a picture of what was going on. I can also say that ...

I'm not going to lie, I didn't think that I was going to love this one. Mainly because of the rhyme scheme, I was slightly turned off to this poem ...

I absolutely loved the symbolism used to compare life to a ball of string. While the language was great, some of the punctuation and grammar skills might have been lacking ...

Based on the title and first line, I truly didn't thing that I was going to like this poem, call me a bit prejudiced. But I really did like it, ...