mystymizer

This poem has great imagery and I did really enjoy its content. My advise, however, would be to add some structure to this thing! ^^ Capitalization is almost a must, ...

Hm...I will not be commenting on the subject matter even though I will say I did enjoy reading this. However, I understand what you mean by the fact you are ...

I certainly enjoyed this! I would, however, advise you to change up the punctuation now and again and get ride of having the "period at the end of every line" ...

Now, I am not a fan of Edward Cullen but lets leave that out of the picture. Speaking of the poem itself, it should have been re-done so that it ...

Okay...this poem as okay. I am not going to talk about structure or grammar, those have been covered already enough. I am going to talk about the actual words themselves. ...

I enjoyed this poem actually...but the part of it that I think needs to be focused on is the structure itself. All of your lines needs to be evened out ...

This poem was great, good scheme and everything. Good thought development. The symmetry of wording (lines) was a little off at points - which I know is impossible to avoid ...

I really, really, really enjoyed this one. Great job. I agree with what everybody said up there but I think this poem is generally good and I simply loved the ...

Her heart turning into ice Her heart already eroded Denying her tears Denying her fears - Claire Leong - The repitition of words is not really working for this poem ...

I really like the italicized questions, they seem like they were meant to be the forefront of this piece and it's good because that is how they come off. It's ...

I like the idea of this poem also, as recently said. I do not, however, really enjoy the format in which is written because it comes off very bland, plain, ...