myjaspercat

I am leaving this as a review ticket. It is so long it makes it hard to sit and review in one sitting. If you still want my review message ...

thank you glad you like it, I am working on getting it revised and even better.

thank you. I thought that I would change the title eventually myself.

srry again, I got distracted, how to post a link to your review

srry, I know I didn't write the story or this review, but I would really appreciate it if you could tell me how. thnx :)

Hello Em101cats, Myjaspercat here to leave you a comment. I think that what you have here is good idea. (I mean the Oddball Object thing.) But remember you should still ...

thank you, and about the one line being of thing; yeah I saw that too. My computer is old and I tried to fix it but couldn't so I kind ...

no problem :) I try to point out a few individual things and then I like to an "overview" because I feel that it helps the writer better. Glad to ...

of course, anytime

24 hour review ticket. If I don't get to it by then, message me

thank you

Thank you.

again, i wasnt trying to be mean or anything, but when I see something that needs work I will speak my mind. Sorry if i hurt your feelings, that wasnt ...

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

thank you so much and I would definitely like to read this story of yours sometime.