myjaspercat

Hey there, I'm very grateful for your review, thank you so much! I just wanted to address some of the comments/questions expressed in your review to hopefully clear some things ...

Lol I'm glad you thought it sounded like someone becoming a tree because that is exactly what I was trying to portray through the entire piece.

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it. About the renamed part, it refers to oxygen and how trees take in carbon dioxide and make it into oxygen

Of course, I'm glad to help. Thank you for clarifying that line about the engineers and doctors, it really helps me understand it a tad bit better. Good luck with ...

Thank you for the review I greatly appreciated it. I had fun reading actually. About the scene as a whole, I get where you're coming from and when I go ...

Thank you, I'm glad for the help. About the numbering, it's written as a spoken word poem and yes they kinda number the problems but they are also supposed to ...

thank you for your review, I greatly appreciate it.

Ok, knowing now that the you symbolizes a proper noun I can see how it's capitalized now. Good luck with your writing and I'm glad to be of some help.

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you found the piece interesting. In regards to your question, when I said Spanish hips, I was talking about the body shape of ...

Thank you so much, I'm glad you like the poem.

ok, have you tried hitting "shift enter" when starting a new line? that typically keeps the lines together without the added space, making it easier to format.

Hey there Chitz, its been awhile since your review but I haven't been able to get to a reply till now. The poem is about all of the violence that's ...

thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you liked the show and I guess I'm going to have to look up this show now.

Thank you so much for the review. A little bit about this piece --I wrote it about myself two days ago so it's probably one the more personal pomes of ...