myjaspercat

of course, I plan to, it just helps for me to start from the end if that makes sense

thank you and I didn't intend for this to be the whole chapter, its more like the final paragraphs of an entire story.

thank you for the review. You were right, the main character is a female and if you want to know her name it is the prologue, but again thank you ...

thank you, and for a simple clear up, this entire part is a flashback that's why it is italicized

thank you for the review, to clear up something, the difference in tense change between the first few parts is because part one is actually a flashback of sorts while ...

thank you for the review, to clear up something, the difference in tense change between the first few parts is because part one is actually a flashback of sorts while ...

of course, anytime

oh ok, that makes a bit more sense. And it does take some work to be able to describe things great, like I still cant even do that and I've ...

thank you for you review.

Thank you for your review, I greatly appreciate it.

thank you for the review

thank you

of course and i yeah sometimes i mix my reviews since i personally write both prose and poetry and sometimes i forget to close a part of my mind and ...

the struggles of being a writer, when you want to truly write you have to write in the moment...

I understand, you dont have to put in the personal details, even you created details that represented yours with out being to personal it would add a lot more to ...