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7.5 billion people, 4,416 cities, 195 countries, 8 planets, 1 universe, I would end each of these lines [this one and the ones above] with a period and then start ...

Hey there LadyShadows, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Black socks were pulled from an oak dresser. Black velvet blankets covered her bed, in which where she sat on ...

Hey there GreenTulip Myjaspercat here to leave you a review I believe that Robert Frost’s poem, “Fire and Ice” fits the world I live in pretty well. A small poem, ...

Hey there SpiritSails, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Normally this doesn't happen, but I actually really enjoyed this piece so I don't really have anything to review in ...

Hey there Kostia, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks She woke up with a slight headache, Add an 'a' after the comma. small price to pay for the ...

Hey there RishabhParmar, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Nit-picks/Line-by-Line Splendid suit, Lavish car Big house and a supermodel wife I would switch the "and a" to a comma ...

Hey there Midnightmoon Myjaspercat here to leave you a review So, overall I liked this story a lot. You did have a few errors that'll point out latter but they ...

Hey there, I bet you know what this is... Before I start though. I wanted to mention that I didn't read any of the other reviews, so if I repeat ...

Hey there RubyRed, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review LINE-BY-LINE/NIT-PICKS: Lights lit up all the hallways and rooms of the asylum comma causing Jillian to shut her eyes tightly ...

Hey there L182, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. LINE-BY-LINE/NITPICKS: In essence I should be able to float Ok, so as a start, this isn't bad. But I touch ...

Hey there Shota Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Now I don't think I've said this yet, so here I go... Welcome to YWS! It's always nice to see ...

Hey there, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Before I get started I would just like to welcome you to YWS, it's always great to see a new person ...

Hey there Anico146, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review LINE-BY-LINE REVEIW/NIT-PICKS: I looked out the window in the grief counselor’s office of Northstorm High. It was on the second ...

Hey there Zel, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review... Now I noticed that the previous reviewers already mentioned a thing here or there that I thought of while reading ...

Marquee Jonnep absent-mindedly stroked his pet cat, Czar, as he studied the tax forms spread out before him. Across from him, I don't like the beginning of this line but ...