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Re: Rest Your Eyes
Hello bluenekogirl, Myjaspercat here for your review Ok, so before I begin the rest of my review I want to throw a little disclaimer out there (something I do for ...
Mar 2, 2015 -
Re: The Child
Hello wholocker78218, Myjaspercat here for your review First thing I would like to mention would be that I do like the concept behind this poem. And if I am thinking ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Pure of Heart Part 1
Hello TigersMoon, Myjaspercat here for a review Before I begin telling you everything I didn't like or that I think should be worked upon, why not start with the positives. ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Tunes
Hello Rascalover, Myjaspercat here for your review "Tunes full my ears" ----This is very blunt "Artists, genres, composers" ----Instead of saying this, why not mention certain artists, genres, compose
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: The Words That Came Out of Her Mouth - Prologue
Hello pinkflutegirl, Myjaspercat here to give you a review As I do for most reviews I want to remind you that writing a Vampire novel (even werewolf, zombie, dystopian) is ...
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: Blue eyes (prologue stanza 1)
Hello HUA, Myjaspercat here for your review So the first thing I want to say is that this is short, I noticed the whole stanza 1 thing so I am ...
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 13: Thy Kingdom Come Part 1
Hello D4RKR4VEN, Myjaspercat here for your review First thing I would like to mention is that I normally don't review work if I haven't read any of the other parts ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~I Part One
1.) walk out the door, confidently walking past a surprised RP." ----Few things here: A.) I am slightly confused what you mean by RP, can you clarify this for me. ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The Assasin War Ch. 1-6
Hello Pinkratgirl, Myjaspercat here for your review First thing I would like say is when I read the title I was like "all hella na, why post 6 chapters in ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Jumping the Fence, Part 1
Hello TheSliverFox, Myjaspercat here for your review 1.) "In my hands I held a leather-bound journal, its yellowing pages filled with handwritten notes and sketches made by my grandfather. “I ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 5.1
Hello Arkhaion, Myjaspercat here for your review Before I start I just want to say I coming in with a fresh mind since I haven't read anything of the parts ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae: Prologue
Hello IssacHunt, Myjaspercat here for your review "Long ago, around the time we would identify as the “16th century”, two of the most malevolent beings fused themselves together to make ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Aftermath
Hey Tigerlilly37, Myjaspercat here for your review I want to start of by saying this: (now please don't take it personally) poetry based on love is cliché. It is hard ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: Worth Fighting For: Prologue
Hello Pook, Myjaspercat here for your review Before I get started I want to point out that Zombie/Dystopian novels are very common so make sure you aren't writing anything cliché. ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: "The Witnesses of Death"
Hello Pendr, Myjaspercat here for your review Ok, well I have to say, this must have been some dream. However I do like the concept of the story but I ...
Jan 26, 2015
