myjaspercat

Introduction All her life, Giovanna wanted to put her love out into the world. She had always believed that most people were deserving of love and that even the most ...

Hello and good evening, It has been a while since I’ve reviewed work so bear with me, and remember, you are free to take and leave what you may. My ...

Hey BeautifulSparkle, I wanted to leave a little voice of my own here. More a comment on the piece and my own opinions/thoughts on your essay rather than a review, ...

Hey there Veki Jaspercat here to leave you a review. I got Scared and thought The underlined word here should be lowercased as it is not a proper noun. escape ...

Hey there JellyRose, Jaspercat here to leave you a review on this amazing night. Nit-picks He stared at me. His eyes gleamed with certainty I personally would rewrite this line ...

Squirming worms of dread of deepest desires and unfinished threads I honestly would put a full stop here. If you don't want to put a full stop here then I ...

Hey there! Jaspercat here to leave you a review. As a quick disclaimer I haven't read the first half of this story so if I say something that has previously ...

Hey there Starlight, Jaspercat here to leave you a review. It's his second winter with a loving family--and his first winter since becoming a Giant. I would recommend taking away ...

Hey there Em16, Jaspercat here to leave you a review. I’m standing on a ledge Curled on the edge of night Maybe it's just me but I don't like the ...

Hey there EternalRain, Jaspercat here to leave you a review. It was at this moment - with the sun setting and clouds pink - that a light blue bird dropped ...

Hey there, Jaspercat here to leave you a review. "Mystery Box" -Its the word that describes our lives perfectly. I would replace the en dash with a comma. Also, and ...

Hey there Scribbler20, Jaspercat here to leave you a review on this wonderful of days. First of all I would love to welcome you to YWS, I look forward to ...

Hey MoonIris, Jaspercat here to leave you a review Nit-Picks She started waking up, but her head felt so heavy...Kaltaine didn’t felt like having the strength to get up. The ...

Hey there, I'm just going to leave a little review here if you don't mind. For one the story is pretty good. It's sad and I'm going to go out ...

Hey there! Jaspercat here to leave you a review. I haven't written one in quite some time but I'm going to give it a go. If you have any questions ...