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Yes, exactly. Amanda you need to describe the character better but you have to string it out. It's a girl right? I remember reading it before but it sure sounded ...

That is quite interesting. Um... I'm not sure how to really review on poety so I try. :? Hm... The life and death thing is a twist in my book ...

Howed he move from one place to another. I thought he was in a desert and the people say they found him in there forest.. Cool name. I'm never good ...

It's very intertaining but why is the prince friends with Mia? How did they meet? When Mia lied down it should be layed down, I think anyways. There are afew ...

Okay, I was getting confussed with the sun god Sol. Is it a e or a she? I think once I read it was a she and the next it ...

It is cute. I have to agree, but your punctuation is a need help in. YOu might want to reread some of it too. Peices are ether sketchy or the ...

All those i's need to be I's some of my friends have already lost there virginity *shiver* Scary When we got there i sat down in Starbucks pulled my top ...

That was quite interesting. I have to say I haven't reviewed a single one in si-fi until this one. It is true not many review these but it's probable because ...

3 am Three A.M. Instead I lay there looking up and thinking about our current situation. So many things to consider I thought. There was her past to think about.[quote] ...

Most of it is great ringo but the one you kept using at the end wasgetting old by the end of it and this is quite short. You could easily ...

in self-same rhyme and cadence fair that fills this eve in June, It is quite beautiful and flows with out bumps as already said. That's all I can say about ...

100,000,000 People pretty much our whole words population.. Um.. worlds? As I walk into the house I see Axel “Axel, what are you doing to the poor Omė?” I asked ...

Unfair People go and hang out. I can't join the fun. Wouldn't it sound better as I can't join in the fun? You already made up your mind. That just ...

is either there in the beginning to not there at all. beginning or not there at all. Okay, that was romantic! So cute. Um... the fact that Alice keeps saying ...

Okay first: equivalent of a god, God Make that g big! Well as short as it is I do finally feel more sympathy for her. It almost seamed as though ...