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This is a solid piece, but the only, one, real criticism I can throw down is that overall it seems a bit formulaic. I can tell you are a great ...

This was an interesting piece. The emotion was powerful, and I can tell that there is a defined idea you're trying to get at, but I don't know if the ...

I'm kinda confused on what all is going on in this. Is there some sort of class war between the people living in one neighborhood and the ones in the ...

[quote]The Man of Many Words My heart is slowly lit, by hollow expressed with wit. But I'll remain on guard, for love is still too cold . I won't forget ...

Great Job! I only have two small suggestions, I can almost hear it crack, maybe change it to I can hear it moan and shake, the second, can I leave ...

I liked this, i wont lie, i did get kinda lost in it's length towards the middle, but I loved the ending; it was very quaint and somber. I will ...

I liked the repetition of black, added for an interesting tone. I like it the way it is, but possibly you could go for a theme where you contrast black ...

Her words are lost, they're silenced by the ignorance maybe Her words are lost, silenced by their ignorance. Of the people who don't know her, people that pass her by. ...

I'm very excited by what could happen with this story! I have absolutely no clue where it is going though... I mean I can guess it has something to do ...

I honestly didn't enjoy this piece much, but it's only because it's not my favorite style of writing, not because it's a horrible piece! Overall, it was solid at the ...

I'm not sure if you're trying to make it rhyme but if you are, you defiantly need to change up the above lines, but I think that if you like ...