Hey Skins! Cakerissa here!
First of all, I will say I'm sorry for reviving this work that was done all the way back in 2009, but it intrigued me. So here I am, writing a review to a poem that was done seven years ago. Second of all, I just want to ask you, WERE YOU DISCRIBING ME IN THIS? BECAUSE YOU NAILED IT!! now who has a stalker... Okay, onto the review.Typically I don't like longer poems like this because people go too in depth, but you didn't. This was very well writen and I think so many people can relate to this. we should band together and overthrow the popular people Now, I didn't see any grammatical mistakes and you described your character perfectly, though maybe add in a few of her good qualities? And how about her dreams? Does she dream of being popular, or is she fine being a shadow? Just a few tips and questions to help you, though its probably too old for you to care anymore. (That was not meant to be offensive in any way.)
Keep writing and reviewing!
Cakerissa
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