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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: a writer's statement.

    I loved it. It really describes the life of a writer. In contrast to what April *peanutgallery007* said, I actually loved the last part. and I don’t write for you ...

    May 31, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: God's Tears

    I thought the title was misleading. It was a great title, by the way, so congrats on that. But when I clicked on it, I expected something more...... melancholic. Oh ...

    May 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Chessmate

    I do not intend to be rude, but here is my opinion. As a passionate chess player, this is an insulting view of the game. Pawns are NOT worthless and ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Suicide Note

    That was good. It was oddly original and very interesting. Here's a suggestion though.... You don’t need an irresponsible girl who fails in almost all everything. You don’t need a ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Abortion

    Wow. You're an incredibly powerful poet. I wish I was this good. It's awfully nice that you're writing about something the world needs to consider instead of some cliche hackneyed ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The Talking of Swans

    That was... deep. I think it was way better than your other one (no offense or anything). Haha. I was considering about writing some lyrics for BBB's contest too, but ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Garage Sale of Memories

    That was a really good message you sent out there; that memories are priceless. Garage sale of memories Get 'em while they're cheap. The sign was old and faded, like ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: That kid

    I really liked this. I once knew a kid in my class who was just like this. He would wear these ragged clothes and everyone would make fun of him ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Damage of Reality

    I love the title. I thought the poetry was swell, especially the last part. I did have a few problems though... Your mother, your father, Your sister, your brother, your ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Crying On Paper

    Hello evanrith. My opinion on your poem is that it has a great idea behind it but the words are a bit boring. I absolutely loved the title though. It ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Time

    Hello there. This was quite an insightful piece but I think it would've been more meaningful if it rhymed. Anyways.... It makes the memories fade the memories fade Heal the ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [deleted]

    That was... soothing in an insane way. I am Helen. I am Helen. My name is Helen. Although yesterday it was Hannah, and tomorrow it will be Ruth, for now ...

    Dec 29, 2008


what are stories if not just vehicles for the pain of your own heart
— soundofmind