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Re: a writer's statement.
I loved it. It really describes the life of a writer. In contrast to what April *peanutgallery007* said, I actually loved the last part. and I don’t write for you ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: God's Tears
I thought the title was misleading. It was a great title, by the way, so congrats on that. But when I clicked on it, I expected something more...... melancholic. Oh ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Chessmate
I do not intend to be rude, but here is my opinion. As a passionate chess player, this is an insulting view of the game. Pawns are NOT worthless and ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Suicide Note
That was good. It was oddly original and very interesting. Here's a suggestion though.... You don’t need an irresponsible girl who fails in almost all everything. You don’t need a ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Abortion
Wow. You're an incredibly powerful poet. I wish I was this good. It's awfully nice that you're writing about something the world needs to consider instead of some cliche hackneyed ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: The Talking of Swans
That was... deep. I think it was way better than your other one (no offense or anything). Haha. I was considering about writing some lyrics for BBB's contest too, but ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Garage Sale of Memories
That was a really good message you sent out there; that memories are priceless. Garage sale of memories Get 'em while they're cheap. The sign was old and faded, like ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: That kid
I really liked this. I once knew a kid in my class who was just like this. He would wear these ragged clothes and everyone would make fun of him ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: The Damage of Reality
I love the title. I thought the poetry was swell, especially the last part. I did have a few problems though... Your mother, your father, Your sister, your brother, your ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Crying On Paper
Hello evanrith. My opinion on your poem is that it has a great idea behind it but the words are a bit boring. I absolutely loved the title though. It ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Time
Hello there. This was quite an insightful piece but I think it would've been more meaningful if it rhymed. Anyways.... It makes the memories fade the memories fade Heal the ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
That was... soothing in an insane way. I am Helen. I am Helen. My name is Helen. Although yesterday it was Hannah, and tomorrow it will be Ruth, for now ...
Dec 29, 2008
