murtuza

Stitches! Well, like the title says, it's definitely splattered poetry! And a good splatter at that too! I love just throwing something in there and then expressing it. Makes me ...

Pencilgirl! You've shown such a great amount of profound meaning form this piece and I'm instantly switched on to philosophy mode. It didn't sound too monotonous and kept the tone ...

Deanie! Haha, such an adorable insight into the magic and wonder that love sparks within us. This is sweet and since you wrote this based off your sister's curiosity, it's ...

Hey misstoria, I really like this poem since it has that frank and casual feel to it. I simply love those descriptions of what love and showing that all those ...

Hey Anna! There are a lot of beautiful descriptions that really bring out your talent. Despite being of such a cliched context, I still find that this poem has potential. ...

Hey anna :) I love this poem. It's sweet and I love the ending! Great job and I hope your sister has learnt this valuable lesson you've laid out for ...

Seraph! Quite frankly, I don't know where to begin this review! It's like I'm being bombarded with such great poetic precision. And I'm loving it even more. So, as for ...

Hey OyVey, For me, this poem has so much metaphorical sense behind it. I really love how you've used the concept of there being colours and the 'lines' that hold ...

Hey there, chezka! This is another good poem of yours that I like. It's raw and it is full of emotion. I like the 'It ends tonight!' feel of the ...

chezka! This is such a great poem! I love how you got the inspiration from the car ride and mixed it with the poem. You've got a very creative mind ...

Hey Maya! This is a great poem and you've managed to add some great moments to this. Though I would say, it isn't as perfect as it could be. for ...

Short and brief with a message of hope and encouragement for the plight of mankind. Although i feel that in some places, the poem was losing me, but you picked ...

Tiny! I love it! Better than the Nameless bit as well :) Great job writing this. 'Black Feathers' is way better! I enjoyed this piece a lot. Murtuza :)

Hi Amy! Yes, eve-teasing, lecherous and perverted. Many men share these traits and have a certain pride about it. Maybe just to show that they are actually 'men' or either ...

Karin! It seems like the poetic forces accumulated your mind and have brought you to write this powerful piece with such detailed emotions. The imagery is so sublime and it ...