In the end, we're all the same
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
All identities will rust
Graves will fall unnamed
In the end, you cannot tell
After all, we'll each bleed red,
Share Earth, a common bed
And show our bones as well
But in the end, we should be proud
Did we unite, did we stand?
Have we loved across all lands,
Or did we fade into the crowd?
In the end, when we look back
Did we live only by a ballot?
Will we see a color potrait,
Or is it all just gray and black?
Before the end, please hear my plea:
"We were made for more than this;
Push aside all differences
And be one humanity"
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gosh! this is a fantastic one! you've conveyed an essentially undeniable fact through such simple words!
just love it!
You've done a great job here. It's really inspiring as well as flawless. I look forward to seeing more of you.
Thumbs up.
Zaid.
Short and brief with a message of hope and encouragement for the plight of mankind. Although i feel that in some places, the poem was losing me, but you picked it up well in the end with a crisp and clear moral! Another great piece that i have greatly enjoyed. Nice work and keep this up!
wow.This is a great job from you:D i like the theme that you grab thereit really working as a good poem!
In the end, when we look back
Did we live only by a ballot?
Will we see a color potrait,
Or is it all just gray and black?
Before the end, please hear my plea:
"We were made for more than this;
Push aside all differences
And be one humanity"
*This stanzas looks so nice.Good job from you n_n