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Wait im confused, is there another number 20?

Wow, I'm glad Tammy is helping her. Jamie, and of coarse -course :) Other than that another brillaint piece! meevs x

thanks, idecided that he would fall in love with Chris for a reason. I study psychology and its a fact that a high perecentage of people who were sexually abused ...

Ok i really liked this apart from: The wonderous wonders this world gives, Wonderous wonders would be good if it hadn't been done before so many times! Other than that ...

I liked the first two lines actually :) I liked the whole thing, I can't say anything bad about it! Meevs x

Posted Ice Cubes #20 its rated so it wont be on the main page, its also very short but hey, it builds tension that way ;)

Well, I have to make all this shorter for the creative writing portoflio thing, they put together everyone who took the course's work and put it into a book i ...

Yeah, I must admit this was such a strange topic to be given, we had to make the ivy resemble something, our teacher suggested abuse so In my lack of ...

Thanks for the reviews! I guess the development with the characters is really in Ice Cubes snoink so i guess its hard to really get a clear idea of whats ...

Just so you all know, My Creative Writing teacher loved this and she is going to send it off to publishers! *gets nervous* So I won't be posting it anymore ...

Oh haha the people in this are all real so Chris was like, well it had to be that :D

Thanks for the feedback, I have done some more of this! (Shock horror I am writing something other than Ice Cubes!) I will post more soon so watch out! Meevs ...

:O That is all.. and Poooooooor Jamie! :'( Meevs x

part five when when when???????

Another great peice JC! Your writing has defiantly improved since the first POD, i thin itd down to just getting into the flow of it and knowing the charatcers better, ...