miyaviloves

Hmm...This was good JC but I don't think that there is much here, compared to your POD pieces this is not very indepth atall. BUt then again I hsouldn't compare ...

Ello! Sorry it took me agggges to read this, just been feeling sooooooo lazy lately oops :P Anyway...WOW! I loved this aprt, you built up the tension of Emma looking ...

Hello :) A soft pink glow slowly began to light the dark room, The start ere sounds a little cliche, the soft glow kind of thing...but I don't have any ...

Eee like always it was brilliant! You always capture lot's of emotion in your writing, i think that the mistakes have already been pointed out here :). All the best, ...

I never write poems, in fact I avoid them, however I was feeling very emotional at the time when I wrote this. -Same here, istay verrry clear of poetry and ...

Yeah like everrryone had said verrrry short, but I'm sure you can join some of the chapters together when you have written more and stuff. As for this piece, it ...

I agree that this was entrancing, I actually really liked this, original, and just quite...I don't know what the word is so I will just reapted and use entrancing :) ...

Hullo Fabien! The warmth kisses our frozen cheeksas Cheeksas? Shoudl this be cheeks? I liked this, you're writing is very poetic, descriptive and it works very well, I noticed that ...

I like how you change the voice, it gives a good insight into each characters thoughts without like saying that you are changing the point of view, its rather swanky! ...

No sorry m'dear, I didn't read this, first off you need to space the writing, It's just a hell of a lot easier to read, especially on computers where it ...

Yeah I did like this aswell, but I think that you could make it even better :D Some of the sentences seem a little too long: Her parents, who had ...

I'm a little confused as to how you will be posting this, Chapters that aren't from Corrie? Sorry a little confused here, might be because I am sleepy though lol. ...

I too found this very humourous :D But in all honesty I have only skipped through the film :( I should really watch it all the way through one day ...

Hi again! I'm here to review yay! over lukewarm coffee and a cruller -Realllllllly don't mean to sound dumb here but what is a cruller? which was slowly rising and ...

I really enoyed this piece, you said that you were not going to continue this but I reallt think you could make something of it! Yor description seems very well ...