mistielovesyou

Your use of metaphor is nearly impeccable! I felt like they were all tangible, all authentic expressions of your love for someone else. I felt how you really wanted to ...

I thought this was a great portrait of what I assume is your inner world. I can relate to feeling trapped, like there's something that I need to break out ...

This is a very good poem in my opinion. I really liked the resentment between the narrator and the man she is talking about. Very interesting. This is actually one ...

This is really great. I like this poem. I could really see, in my head, all the images you were trying to get across. You used to rain to construct ...

This is an interesting subject for you to take on, but you didn't really bring anything to it. You just keep repeating the same things over and over again, without ...

This was a great poem. You talked so fondly of home and of a sense of belonging that I felt the same. Going back to your roots, your origins, is ...

Hello, Kaysie. This poem has a gorgeous idea. A lot of us have dreams about our parents and about sad and difficult things and people we have to let go. ...

Very interesting poem. Also sort of daring too; you took a risk and wrote on a heavy subject. The problem I see here is that the tone should be flipped ...

This is so expressive and beautiful! It was great. It didn't seem overdone or underbaked. The question even caught me by surprise, and was thrilling. To me, the house sounds ...

I thought your imagery was great, and the way you express the ideas that you're trying to get across, especially the one about the dog ready to pounce on anyone. ...

Interesting take on those ideas! I like how you let the ideals move very clearly through time, making the poem pretty and easy to read. And the slant line is ...

I really like this story. I have to say that it is interesting, the way that the ideas bounced between the married couple. It reminds of something I'd see in ...

I like this because it is abstract. You seem to have been trying to convey a feeling rather than a story which was done pretty well. Otherwise this story falls ...

Wow. Good. This is great! Sorry, I don't have any critique for this, it's fantastic. I love the subtle creepiness of the old man and woman murderers. You didn't over-exaggerate ...

This is really good. Wow, I'm surprised. I don't know why you haven't gotten a ton of comments. This is fantastic. The only thing I would recommend was that sometimes ...