misstoria

This is amazing. It has so much feeling, honesty and a great deal of truth. Your piece has great flow, structure, and rhythm. When it comes to grammar and punctuation ...

I feel like this would make a great greeting card.

I loved this piece. It was very relatable and interesting, However it needs a little work. Such as the fact that not every line has to be capitalized and not ...

I really loved this piece. It has great emotion and flow. However the fourth stanza sounds a little off to me. The line"with your heart intact" seemed a little out ...

I like this piece quite a bit, but like you said it needs some work. First of all you need to realize that poetry, like all other writing requires punctuation ...

This is an absolutely amazing piece! I am rarely one who doesn't rip a piece apart, but I really adore this. The emotion and story seem very true and real, ...

I adore this! The emotions are very real and raw and I love it! Again I think that you need to work on sentence structure, particularly adding periods and taking ...

I really enjoyed this piece. However it needs a few tweaks. When writing a poem consider line length. Variation is good in sentence but not so much in poems. Most ...

I really enjoyed this! Count the beads of a rosary necklace, my sweet, and save how bout using "say" instead of save a few blessings for me. I like this ...

Hi!! I see this is your first poem, so welcome to YWS. I really liked this poem because I understand the feeling, however others may not so you have to ...

I absoultely love this piece! The emotions are rawl and true, which is a rare find. I think this is really great, but could use a little work. Ethan quickly ...

I really enjoyed this rant/poem even though it didn't fit the usual flow of poetry I still enjoyed it. Your beauty is incomparable Much like the sun, The surroundings disappear, ...

I quite enjoyed this piece, I love poems that rhyme. Roaring waves told the tale of the deep, O’er the grave where sailors sleep. The Swede’s fear showed; sweat wet ...

When I clicked on this link I was surprised to find an entry like this, but it grew on me. It was clever of you to write short little stories ...

Wow, I loved this poem. The emotions and story were really true. So, you believe in God? Then make him make my momma come back. I can't, I say. [color=#FF0000here ...