misfit-writer

I really like this poem but it confused me a little bit i think you should elaborate more also it seemed a little bland like it could use some figurative ...

It's unclear what's going on and what they're being chosen for exactly. Marcus will be chosen, definitely. The opponent who had already won was sitting erect as a poker in ...

I really liked this piece because it was clichée but then evolved with your own feelings, experiences and details. Usually i don't like it when poems rhyme but the rhyming ...

I really love your poem, it's creative and i can tell you really mean what you're saying though it could be more emotional and deep if you added some metaphors ...

The full caps is a little annoying and as TL G-Wooster said childish. I liked the subject of your poem it was creative, though I think you should get deeper ...

Do I love I don't know He doesn't act like i should show Him the love , I show He sits with me at lunch one day He ignores me ...

Look what you make me do, Fall head over heels. I think I like to fall, The funny way it feels. I really like that line :) When I look ...

Elbows nudge past me, In this vicious jungle, Nice metaphor I see his striped blue sweater, Move in the crowd, Maybe a transition here? My heart falls, Down to my ...

I really love this poem, it's amazing, wonderful i really don't have much of a critique though when you say "But that's no great a trouble, " that line doesn't ...

This is my first post! I hope you like it! And if you have any title suggestions, feel free to share! My hands are clutching my script, I watch in ...

It really was better then the whole twilight series, I'm a fan of twilight though the writing wasn't that great your story was funny throughout the whole thing but more ...

This was a really touching poem i think it's a little more narrative then whatever category this is :) one thing though towards the middle it started to get a ...

You hold me high, keeping me sane. Will you bind me to another chain? I really love this stanza it shows the dependence of the narrarator but also introduces the ...