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Re: Static | Chapter One
Back again! Firstly, I really enjoyed this. You managed to keep it fast paced whilst not making it rushed. Your descriptions were very vivid and I could clearly picture the ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hello! I've never wrote a review on a story before so I'm not sure if it will be any good, but I'll attempt it. This is a very good start, ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Near Rock Bottom
Hello! I've not done many reviews on here so I'm not particularly good at them, please bear with me and feel free to ignore my advice if you don't agree ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Purity
Hello! I haven't done many reviews on here so I'm still learning, please bear with me. I really enjoyed this poem, I think it holds a lot of emotion and ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: A Barrel
Hello! I've not been on this website for very long so I'm still learning how to properly write reviews. Please feel to completely ignore my advice or at least take ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: a mile on a mile on a mile
Hello! I'm not very good at reviews, so please bear with me and feel free to take my advice with a pinch of salt, I'm still learning. First of all, ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: my body is not a temple
This is one of my first reviews on here, so please bear with me and ignore me if none of of what I'm saying makes sense. I'm new to this. ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: homecoming
This is my first review on here, so please bear with me and feel free not to take any of my advice, this is just my first impressions from reading ...
Dec 23, 2015
