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Stella! I really liked this! (Although remember I know squat about poetry) I loved the story behind it. She had someone she depended on, and whom she loved, but soon ...

Hey I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks Black military boots pounding on the white linoleum floor, General Fredrick Saloman flashed his pass to ...

Hallo! Mia here as requested! *Hands Forever Threnody a purple cookie* ^_^ I couldn't find any big mistakes, so I became a bit mean and nitpicked the entire piece. :twisted: ...

Hey ofir! I'm back to review chapter one! :D Grammatical mistakes and nitpicks I opened my eyes unwillingly, staring at the boy in front of my eyes. Eyes is used ...

Hello, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Before I start, I wanted to tell you that your first sentence was great. It hooked me into the ...

Hey, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Nitpicks and grammatical mistakes The brown marble floor looked clean enough, the tiny old love seat that was half ...

Hey Big sis! Welcome to the yws. Before I review this piece, I would point out one or two rules you may not have been familiar with since you're new ...

Hey, I'm Mia and I will be revewiing this today. Grammar/ nitpicks The old man awoke with a small gasp. His bedclothes clung to his skin with sweat, the outline ...

Hey, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) these walls contain me as my life comes to a close my fists are no match my scarred wrists, ...

Hey magnusbanfan13! You wrote inkcatcher, right? I loved that, so I was really excited when I came across something else that you wrote. :D Grammar/nitpicks Whether you simply want to ...

Hey, I'm back to review chapter one. :) Sorry this took so long. Nitpicks and Grammatical mistakes It’s two times worse for me because I can actually hear what they’re ...

Hello Megan. I'm Mia and I will be your reviewer today. :) Before I begin with the critique, I noticed you're a new member and thought I'd point out some ...

Hello Thirst! Wow, this was amazing! At first I was a bit doubtful to tell you the truth. Being actually spoken to was a bit disconcerting. However it works perfectly ...

Hey, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Before I start nitpicking, let me just say how much I love this! As a prologue, it was amazing. ...

Hi, I'm Mia and I will be your reviewer today. Oona sat among the tall blades of grass of the Irish countryside. She looked into the dark gray sky, tears ...