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Re: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue
Oh yeah I'd totally like you to tag me. And sorry my review posted twice. I don't know what's up with that.
Jul 2, 2017 -
Re: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue
Yikes! This was intense. I could almost feel the cold of the room and hear the screams of the patients. Great job with your descriptions! I'm not great at reviewing ...
Jul 2, 2017 -
Re: you call me selfish
Hi! I like the whole idea of this poem and how you spoke about putting your mental well-being above someone's expectations. It's an important topic to write about and I ...
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Re: Yellow, Unforgettable
Thank you! I'm glad my poem made you feel that way.
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: The little things
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Jul 1, 2017
Hi, Vegas! Let's get into this review! So the first thing I'd say, for sake of aesthetic, choose a font that's more "boring", as loud fonts can take away from ... -
Re: Grape Expectations
Hi! I'd just like to say, this is honestly so hilarious! I especially loved the line "Does this apply to perishable fruit as well?" And the title is just too ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Yellow, Unforgettable
Thank you! I was worried that the "I'd never hear the end of it" was out of place. Also, the honey in the glass represented all the memories we made ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Yellow, Unforgettable
Thank you! I was hoping the I love you would stand out. And I hope my friendship works out as well as yours did. Your situation gives me some hope.
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Yellow, Unforgettable
Thank you! That's exactly the effect I wanted!
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Yellow, Unforgettable
Thank you!
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Lovelorn
Hi! I'd like to say that this poem conveys your emotion without being overly dramatic or long, so great job with that. Now I have a few small critiques. "Her ...
Jun 30, 2017 -
Re: The Whispering Pine
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the poem.
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: The Whispering Pine
Thank you!
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: The Whispering Pine
Aw thank you! I'll be sure to make the edits you suggested!
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: The Secret of the Costume Room
Aw man, I totally loved this story! It's so original! It was cute to think about costumes dancing around a room and gloating to each other! Thanks for posting this!
Apr 21, 2017
