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midnightdreary

  • Novel / Chapter » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue

    Oh yeah I'd totally like you to tag me. And sorry my review posted twice. I don't know what's up with that.

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue

    Yikes! This was intense. I could almost feel the cold of the room and hear the screams of the patients. Great job with your descriptions! I'm not great at reviewing ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: you call me selfish

    Hi! I like the whole idea of this poem and how you spoke about putting your mental well-being above someone's expectations. It's an important topic to write about and I ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    Thank you! I'm glad my poem made you feel that way.

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The little things

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    Hi, Vegas! Let's get into this review! So the first thing I'd say, for sake of aesthetic, choose a font that's more "boring", as loud fonts can take away from ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Grape Expectations

    Hi! I'd just like to say, this is honestly so hilarious! I especially loved the line "Does this apply to perishable fruit as well?" And the title is just too ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    Thank you! I was worried that the "I'd never hear the end of it" was out of place. Also, the honey in the glass represented all the memories we made ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    Thank you! I was hoping the I love you would stand out. And I hope my friendship works out as well as yours did. Your situation gives me some hope.

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    Thank you! That's exactly the effect I wanted!

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    Thank you!

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lovelorn

    Hi! I'd like to say that this poem conveys your emotion without being overly dramatic or long, so great job with that. Now I have a few small critiques. "Her ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Whispering Pine

    Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the poem.

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Whispering Pine

    Thank you!

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Whispering Pine

    Aw thank you! I'll be sure to make the edits you suggested!

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The Secret of the Costume Room

    Aw man, I totally loved this story! It's so original! It was cute to think about costumes dancing around a room and gloating to each other! Thanks for posting this!

    Apr 21, 2017


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath