midnightdreary

Ummm idk why that posted like three times. Sorry about that!

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Hi again! I like the continuation of the "different person point of view" thing. I also noticed that throughout your whole series, everyone has been staring, thinking 'huh, I shouldn't ...

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Hi again! I like the continuation of the "different person point of view" thing. I also noticed that throughout your whole series, everyone has been staring, thinking 'huh, I shouldn't ...

Yeah definitely! It especially seemed much less rushed in the end!

Yeah I agree with the turtle part totally. I'll keep in mind some things I can add to the protagonists personality and interests as well. Thanks for the review! I'm ...

Oh no it wasn't a waste of time! It does fit in poetry, it's just that you used an unconventional format.

Oh wow. I'm really glad!

Oh no, I'm sorry about your friend. I'm sure they'll keep in touch with you and you'll be just fine. And yeah, I've only just started trying to give my ...

Aw man I just had a cello recital like half an hour ago and this is honestly exactly how I felt. This is honestly such a great and uplifting poem.

Aw man this was such a sweet poem! I hope you get the life you want with this person. Also, I think the rhymes and the rhythms worked out so ...

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Wow this poem was so great! I love how you slowly made your way to the final point of your poem keeping the reader guessing on what you're message is. ...

No problem! And sorry my review posted twice. I don't know what that's about.

Hi! Man I'm sorry you're having this kind of trouble. I feel like your poem gives the exact feeling of when you're wishing for someone to like you. That being ...

It's a bit long but totally worth the read.

Yeah, in my opinion the changes you made totally helped. I can't wait for the next chapter.