michaelloffet

Don't worry I will be continuing we have not even begun yet :)

Thanks, make sure to read the other page :)

Thanks i'll make those changes once I can get back on my PC.

I'm sorry but I do not have a clue as to what the theme of this poem is. The parts on the right side confused me and well that's all ...

Will make sure to add commas, the set free part stays the same. He does understand and is actually a nice guy.

Made changes.

Made changes.

Thanks i'll make the changes later

Thanks i'll add those changes tomorrow when I add page 3 the capital letters are there by accident just used to randomly putting them in their.

Done, thanks for the feedback and I have edited it as requested.

Thanks, when I get home ill make sure to make those changes. :)

Thanks when I get home i'll improve it.

Your welcome keep up the good work :)

Yeah, I wish :)

Great job, I think we all know who this "Snake" is. Hm?